I think the writer was wanting to dangle a carrot, so to speak, in order to drum up some intensity. However, there just wasn’t enough clear information given. Also, as much as I’d like to think of myself as an adult, I giggled when I read ejaculated. But all is not lost. I read some promise in those vague words. Just rewrite, rewrite, rewrite! Then do it again!
I think the writer was wanting to dangle a carrot, so to speak, in order to drum up some intensity. However, there just wasn’t enough clear information given. Also, as much as I’d like to think of myself as an adult, I giggled when I read ejaculated. But all is not lost. I read some promise in those vague words. Just rewrite, rewrite, rewrite! Then do it again!