No turn. How many times have we read pretty much the same description of a crowded marketplace? This is well written, but I'm tired of seeing this as an opening. I already have a picture of a crowded marketplace in my mind. All you have to do is mention it and get on with the action. You can add more description in passing if you like.
No turn. How many times have we read pretty much the same description of a crowded marketplace? This is well written, but I'm tired of seeing this as an opening. I already have a picture of a crowded marketplace in my mind. All you have to do is mention it and get on with the action. You can add more description in passing if you like.