Would you turn Janet's first page? Be tough. Comments help the writer.

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  • Katherine - 15 years ago

    It took me a lot of deliberation to decide. In the end, I turned. It wasn't too bad, but I feel that it was a bit... choppy. It progressed very fast, and the name 'Bob' for a prince didn't sound right to me!
    I think I would have been willing to turn the page and give it a chance, but I don't know how much further I would have read on.

  • John V - 15 years ago

    No turn. All in all it wasn't bad. "Prince Bob" took me out of the story from the start - how about "Prince Robert"? Also, it was a cute scene, but not really compelling.

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