No turn. In fact, I didn't finish the first page due to the poor writing. In the first sentence, the "that" or the "my" needs to go, and "with" before "me" would work better. The second sentence has "your" for "you're."
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No turn. In fact, I didn't finish the first page due to the poor writing. In the first sentence, the "that" or the "my" needs to go, and "with" before "me" would work better. The second sentence has "your" for "you're."