Does this prologue move you to turn page?

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  • John V - 15 years ago

    No turn. "Blight was to be banished." Good so far..."Most proudly wore robes displaying their ranks and affiliations, mirroring the colored banners and flags that waved from the ceiling and from several balconies in a magical breeze." This sounds like a Harry Potter rip-off, and I'm losing interest..."At any one time there were around twelve score active Wizards, plus that number again of students and those retired. Normally, only fully active Wizards attended gatherings here; students weren’t welcome, and retirees seldom bothered."...Telling background information on the first page, and I'm done.

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