The main thing that jumped out at me was the two comparisons used in a short span of time for The Sixty Six. First a knife, then a snake. Dunno...just would have picked one and stuck with it and maybe built on it if I was going to go to that well again.
The main thing that jumped out at me was the two comparisons used in a short span of time for The Sixty Six. First a knife, then a snake. Dunno...just would have picked one and stuck with it and maybe built on it if I was going to go to that well again.
--John