Would you turn Joel's first page? Be tough. Comments help the writer.

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  • J.C. Towler - 15 years ago

    Yes, too much place-setting going on. China is very nice, silver is well polished and the crystal goblets sparkle in the light of the chandelier, but where is the main course and when is it going to be served?

    --John

  • John V - 15 years ago

    No - nothing happened. It was all description. I've got to think that the author hasn't spent much time at this site.

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