I love, love when stories start like this. The next page starts where you know a lot has happened. It adds and clues me in that this might be a fast moving story. Great 1st page!
Truly a great voice and attention paid to getting a reader's attention without info dump. Got tension set up immediately and with a concise form. Nice work.
I love, love when stories start like this. The next page starts where you know a lot has happened. It adds and clues me in that this might be a fast moving story. Great 1st page!
Truly a great voice and attention paid to getting a reader's attention without info dump. Got tension set up immediately and with a concise form. Nice work.