I voted yes, because farts are always funny. Same with some other guy getting hit in the crotch. Always good for a laugh. In fact, if that could be worked into this first page, it would be even better. "TJ kicked Private Skidmarks in the balls. The private emitted a great and sour fart (challenge: mname the book that phrase came from) as he doubled over in pain." Now that's what I call comedy.
I voted yes, because farts are always funny. Same with some other guy getting hit in the crotch. Always good for a laugh. In fact, if that could be worked into this first page, it would be even better. "TJ kicked Private Skidmarks in the balls. The private emitted a great and sour fart (challenge: mname the book that phrase came from) as he doubled over in pain." Now that's what I call comedy.
Seriously, I think this submission is a put-on.