I like the idea but you need to simplify some sentences so the reader doesn't get overloaded right away. Rework it a bit so it isn't so dense.
Let me know when this is published - I'll buy it! :)
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I like the idea but you need to simplify some sentences so the reader doesn't get overloaded right away. Rework it a bit so it isn't so dense.
Let me know when this is published - I'll buy it!
:)